Tag Archive | Work In Progress

Sarah’s Dream

Sarah’s Dream

Sarah stood in the fog.  It smelled like strawberries.  A man sat on a park bench, reading a book.  Sarah walked slowly toward the bench, trying to make out the man’s face.  As she got closer, she recognized David, the annoying guy from the library.  She froze. He patted the bench and smiled.  Sarah sat […]

Sarah Is Depressed: Dialogue Critique

Sarah Is Depressed: Dialogue Critique

It’s been forever since I wrote anything on here.  Life is busy.  And since I’m too frazzled to write anything new, I thought another unedited excerpt from my NaNoWriMo novel would do nicely.  After all, this is the place where I write the embarrassing stuff I’m too afraid to show anyone that actually knows me. […]

Polishing My Tools: Writing Men

There’s a great online creative writing group called Write On Edge.  They provide information for writers, writing prompts, and fantastic community support.  There’s even a book club, of sorts, on the Twitter. Here’s the Red Writing Hood prompt for this week. This week, we’d like you to take an honest look in your toolbox and pull out one […]

Work In Progress: Bradley

Work In Progress: Bradley

Like all wannabe writers, I have a work in progress.  I started my novel during National Novel Writing Month (November) and haven’t worked on it since.  I haven’t shared it with anyone.  Because I’m a chicken. As I’ve said before, I’m tired of being timid.  So, here’s an excerpt.   It’s the first draft with no […]